Till Death Do Us Part

-MyAngelMJ-

New member
This is my first attempt at poems

Hope ya like it :)
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Till death do us part

The very first day I had seen you
I knew we were meant to be together
Your playful smile, your lovely voice
I'm not going to miss them, till death do us part

We had our fun times,
We had our differences,
But there is something about us
I’m not going to miss it, till death do us part

You are my precious
You are my everything
What would I do, if it wasn't for you?
I will always love you, till death do us part

We had our plans, but God had his
No matter what happens
You know I will be there for you
You will be in my heart, till death do us part.

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- Keerthi
 

QuietSoul

New member
Keerthi, I love this poem. It's really, really sweet. Your words do have a lot of emotion in them. :)

Please write more often.
 

-MyAngelMJ-

New member
Originally posted by QuietSoul
Keerthi, I love this poem. It's really, really sweet. Your words do have a lot of emotion in them. :)

Please write more often.

Thanks Krys. Glad u liked it :) If it wasn't for ur encouragement, I wouldn't have tried to do anything like this. Thank u :)
 

frozen rose

New member
Very welldone my friend. I can feel the effort and emotion in this poem. You know what I can sense Michael Jackson within those words. I can feel his presence there, like he is actually saying them... I love it, you should write more...
 
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