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Post by QuietSoul » Sun Jun 19, 2005 12:16 pm

If only sleep,
Didn't come to me,
And conciousness,
Was behind me.

If only my eyes,
Could hear the reasons,
And the reasons,
Held the questions.

If only tomorrow,
Could come today,
And yesterday the future,
I'd make no mistake.




I don't think this is finished.

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Post by frozen rose » Sun Jun 19, 2005 12:20 pm

its pretty... another Mike one... lol. your poems are so Michael like, with just reading a line, I think "Michael". Very good.
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Post by QuietSoul » Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:21 pm

Originally posted by frozen rose
its pretty... another Mike one... lol. your poems are so Michael like, with just reading a line, I think "Michael". Very good.
Oh woah!! I'm so shocked! I'm finding it hard to believe, Michael has so much talent.... my poems could never be compared to his....

I never try to write like Michael. Never. I try to write my feelings, and I never think of how I'm writing. The poem ends up the way it should be, the way it's supposed to be.

Thank you again, darling!

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Post by QuietSoul » Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:23 pm

And BTW, where did you get the picture in signature from? It looks recent, is it?

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Post by DarkChild » Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:27 pm

Krystallllll glazing thats gorgeous!!! :| You're too talented!
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Post by Off_the_wall » Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:52 pm

oo thats gorgeous!!!
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Post by frozen rose » Mon Jun 20, 2005 2:07 am

I got it from the MJJsource intro its from the second red spot on the right hand side of the dates!
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Post by QuietSoul » Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:06 am

Thank you so so much!!!! :D

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Post by ThrillerGirl_ » Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:26 pm

Krystle... you're very talented girl!!
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Post by QuietSoul » Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:06 am

*blushes* Thank you, darling... I'm so pleased you like my poetry.

I'll be writing more soon, so please read them.... I don't mean to sound desperate, but not many people come to this forum.... :idontknow :bleh:

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Post by ThrillerGirl_ » Wed Jun 22, 2005 12:56 pm

I'll be here reading your poems :D

They are really impressive and beautifully written!
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Post by QuietSoul » Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:40 pm

Aww... Thank you... I don't know what else to say. :laugh :D

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Post by QuietSoul » Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:45 am

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Post by -MyAngelMJ- » Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:46 am

Thats a beautiful poem, Krys :)
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Post by QuietSoul » Sun Jul 31, 2005 5:26 am

I try my best... thanks... :)

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