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If Only

Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 12:16 pm
by QuietSoul
If only sleep,
Didn't come to me,
And conciousness,
Was behind me.

If only my eyes,
Could hear the reasons,
And the reasons,
Held the questions.

If only tomorrow,
Could come today,
And yesterday the future,
I'd make no mistake.




I don't think this is finished.

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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 12:20 pm
by frozen rose
its pretty... another Mike one... lol. your poems are so Michael like, with just reading a line, I think "Michael". Very good.

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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:21 pm
by QuietSoul
Originally posted by frozen rose
its pretty... another Mike one... lol. your poems are so Michael like, with just reading a line, I think "Michael". Very good.
Oh woah!! I'm so shocked! I'm finding it hard to believe, Michael has so much talent.... my poems could never be compared to his....

I never try to write like Michael. Never. I try to write my feelings, and I never think of how I'm writing. The poem ends up the way it should be, the way it's supposed to be.

Thank you again, darling!

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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:23 pm
by QuietSoul
And BTW, where did you get the picture in signature from? It looks recent, is it?

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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:27 pm
by DarkChild
Krystallllll glazing thats gorgeous!!! :| You're too talented!

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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:52 pm
by Off_the_wall
oo thats gorgeous!!!

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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 2:07 am
by frozen rose
I got it from the MJJsource intro its from the second red spot on the right hand side of the dates!

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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:06 am
by QuietSoul
Thank you so so much!!!! :D

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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:26 pm
by ThrillerGirl_
Krystle... you're very talented girl!!

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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:06 am
by QuietSoul
*blushes* Thank you, darling... I'm so pleased you like my poetry.

I'll be writing more soon, so please read them.... I don't mean to sound desperate, but not many people come to this forum.... :idontknow :bleh:

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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 12:56 pm
by ThrillerGirl_
I'll be here reading your poems :D

They are really impressive and beautifully written!

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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:40 pm
by QuietSoul
Aww... Thank you... I don't know what else to say. :laugh :D

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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:45 am
by QuietSoul
:biglaugh:

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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 11:46 am
by -MyAngelMJ-
Thats a beautiful poem, Krys :)

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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 5:26 am
by QuietSoul
I try my best... thanks... :)