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Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:29 am
by DarkChild
Tears well in her eyes again
Blinking, silver drops float down
Her face imperfect.
She feels she doesn't deserve love
And that love is saved
For beauty, and she is not.

The mirror holds her wholly
Just as she is. Squinting now
She inspects her reflection
Concluding that she'll forever remain
Unwanted, unloved and unheld.

Inside she hopes that one day
She'll find someone not as shallow
As she is, about herself.
Hoping that one day she'll find someone
Who finds her beautiful.

But she knows thats a long shot.

And maybe she's found that someone
But no matter how sincere
The compliments may seem
She knows. Lies, all lies.
It's hard being stubborn sometimes.

The tears fall a river
Silver down her imperfect face
Down her neck, down her
Imperfect body. Her eyes follow
The lines and she cries
And she cries and she cries
And wishes for a miracle.

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:33 am
by -MyAngelMJ-
That was wonderfully written. Its a bit sad though. I love ur poems, Lucy :)

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 7:46 am
by privacy
I looooooove it!!
And maybe she's found that someone
But no matter how sincere
The compliments may seem
She knows. Lies, all lies.
It's hard being stubborn sometimes.
Oooh relate:ness.. I love it, Lucy :)

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:32 pm
by DarkChild
Thanks guys :D

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 1:45 pm
by Pretty Young Thing
Awww girl, that was so sad but yet good and well written. My lil miss creative!

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 4:37 pm
by floacist
Inside she hopes that one day
She'll find someone not as shallow
As she is, about herself.
Hoping that one day she'll find someone
Who finds her beautiful.
I love that part, so sad but so nice. Your so talented Loose!

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:04 pm
by Off_the_wall
so sad but I love it Lucy <33
And maybe she's found that someone
But no matter how sincere
The compliments may seem
She knows. Lies, all lies.

It's hard being stubborn sometimes.
I can relate to that bit alot

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 4:11 am
by Warrior
Reesssess that was a sad poem but you write so well, I liked it

Imperfection Cries

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 2:29 pm
by LoveMeIfYouDare
u can write really well...i love it!:)