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Post by Off_the_wall » Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:06 pm

I sit here thinking to myself as the thoughts pass in and out of my mind
Wondering
What is it going to be next?

[“Keep your friends close, and your enemies’ closer…”]

Does it make you feel good to see me in pain, to know that you hurt me that bad?
I hope I made it worth your while!
For all that time, you would pull me up and then push me right back down again
And I thought you were my friend

[I’m sorry did my back break your knife?]

Physically, you might have gone
But in my head I see you there everyday
[A wound that will never heal]

[Miss Perfect? [I’m sorry; I think you have the wrong person]]

All you ever claimed to be was a lie
And no one would listen until it was too late
You were the one who had it all
It wasn’t me

[I don’t need their sympathy]

For a long time all you did was hurt me.
So now it’s me who hurts me instead.
When I see you all I feel is that pain all over again
And I hate you for it

My lengthy screams
I’m forming fists
Slash and tear at my skin
And let it bleed the pain away
Now scarred on the outside as well as in

You know the rhyme:
“Sticks and stones may break my bones
But words will never hurt me”?
It couldn’t be more wrong
A broken bone can be fixed
But it’s your words that torment me everyday

By Sarah ©
09 August 2005
SARAH

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Post by DarkChild » Thu Aug 11, 2005 6:41 pm

Oh Sparrr thats so sad and painful but its really well written, I especially love the last verse! Its so real! *hug*
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Post by Off_the_wall » Thu Aug 11, 2005 6:53 pm

thanks hunni :)
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Post by privacy » Fri Aug 12, 2005 1:40 am

The last verse is my fave too :) That's so well written Spartican! :D
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Post by Warrior » Fri Aug 12, 2005 4:08 am

hey cutie patootie that was sad but really good

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Post by Off_the_wall » Fri Aug 12, 2005 3:41 pm

Originally posted by Warrior
hey cutie patootie
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thanks guys
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Post by LoveMeIfYouDare » Sun Aug 14, 2005 9:57 am

i can feel the anger in there somehow...good job!:)
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Post by Off_the_wall » Tue Aug 16, 2005 4:44 pm

thanks
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Post by -MyAngelMJ- » Tue Aug 16, 2005 7:16 pm

That was sad but very well written. The last verse is so true.
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Post by Off_the_wall » Thu Aug 18, 2005 3:12 pm

thank u
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