I\'d Give Anything.

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Post by privacy » Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:09 pm

Really personal poem about my gran and grandad. If you don't like, don't waste your breath.



They wouldn't let me see you
"No place for a child"
I converted and prayed
And I begged and I screamed.
I've hated hospitals since.

She depended so much on you.
You waited on her hand and foot.
The purity and love in your heart
only matched by hers.

It was inevitable
her death.
Broken heart.
I needed her. She was all I had.
But I guess she needed you more.

Even at my young age
I knew I'd rather die
Than grow up in this world
With two of my fravourite people.. gone.


I'd give anything to get you back.

I'd give my life.
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Post by DarkChild » Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:11 pm

:( thats so sad and beautiful. It's not bad at all, it's wonderful and gets it across. Especially the last part
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Post by privacy » Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:14 pm

I was worried it wouldn't.. writing while emotional doesn't work :laugh

Thanks girly :)
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Post by LoveMeIfYouDare » Fri Aug 12, 2005 2:20 pm

its really touching!its beautifully written...
It won\\\'t do, to dream of caramel, to think of cinnamon, and long for you...

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Post by privacy » Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:26 am

Thanks girl.. nice to see you in this part of the forum :)
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Post by QuietSoul » Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:36 am

Chrissy... this has brought a tear to my eye. This is exactly how I feel about my Grandmother. I love her so much, and I miss her even more. :(

Thank you for this poem. It has given me something to think about.

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Post by -MyAngelMJ- » Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:48 am

Its a really touching and beautiful poem.
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Post by Off_the_wall » Tue Aug 16, 2005 4:45 pm

that brought tears to my eyes acy, so sad, but so beautiful <33
SARAH

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Post by privacy » Thu Aug 18, 2005 4:06 am

Thanks, Krys! I didn't think it would do that.. but I'm glad it did.

Thanks, Keerthi :)... sarah thank you so much.. I love your poetry :D
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Post by abbymjgirl » Thu Aug 18, 2005 1:43 pm

That's a real beautiful poem..yet sad. But very well written, Acy! I liked it. :)

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Post by privacy » Fri Aug 19, 2005 10:40 am

thanks, girl :)
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Post by Warrior » Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:16 pm

hi baby a very sad poem but also very good :)

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Post by privacy » Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:21 pm

Thanks Yogi =D
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