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I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:09 pm
by privacy
Really personal poem about my gran and grandad. If you don't like, don't waste your breath.



They wouldn't let me see you
"No place for a child"
I converted and prayed
And I begged and I screamed.
I've hated hospitals since.

She depended so much on you.
You waited on her hand and foot.
The purity and love in your heart
only matched by hers.

It was inevitable
her death.
Broken heart.
I needed her. She was all I had.
But I guess she needed you more.

Even at my young age
I knew I'd rather die
Than grow up in this world
With two of my fravourite people.. gone.


I'd give anything to get you back.

I'd give my life.

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:11 pm
by DarkChild
:( thats so sad and beautiful. It's not bad at all, it's wonderful and gets it across. Especially the last part

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 12:14 pm
by privacy
I was worried it wouldn't.. writing while emotional doesn't work :laugh

Thanks girly :)

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2005 2:20 pm
by LoveMeIfYouDare
its really touching!its beautifully written...

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:26 am
by privacy
Thanks girl.. nice to see you in this part of the forum :)

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:36 am
by QuietSoul
Chrissy... this has brought a tear to my eye. This is exactly how I feel about my Grandmother. I love her so much, and I miss her even more. :(

Thank you for this poem. It has given me something to think about.

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 6:48 am
by -MyAngelMJ-
Its a really touching and beautiful poem.

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 4:45 pm
by Off_the_wall
that brought tears to my eyes acy, so sad, but so beautiful <33

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 4:06 am
by privacy
Thanks, Krys! I didn't think it would do that.. but I'm glad it did.

Thanks, Keerthi :)... sarah thank you so much.. I love your poetry :D

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 1:43 pm
by abbymjgirl
That's a real beautiful poem..yet sad. But very well written, Acy! I liked it. :)

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 10:40 am
by privacy
thanks, girl :)

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:16 pm
by Warrior
hi baby a very sad poem but also very good :)

I\'d Give Anything.

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:21 pm
by privacy
Thanks Yogi =D