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Post by privacy » Thu Sep 15, 2005 4:54 pm

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Do you expect me to watch this happen
Without feeling entirely solitary?
I'm watching how I want my life to be
How it was when we were all close.

Now all I've got is memories of when
we went shopping, movies, chilled at yours.
I know I'll never experience that again,
but I'd rather that than be replaced.

I thought the nights of me crying into
a permanently damp pillow were gone.
It seems I've travelled back through space and time
I feel like a pawn. Useless. Withdrawn.

You'll be better off without me around
You'll go far in this world, I've always known.
Having me near you is the last thing
on your mind.


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Post by DarkChild » Thu Sep 15, 2005 5:02 pm

Ohhh Ace thats so sad, but its SO well written. It's so real :( Love ya babe.
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Post by privacy » Thu Sep 15, 2005 5:04 pm

Is it ok? I couldn't really get much emotion in it.. but thanks hon :)
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Post by abbymjgirl » Thu Sep 15, 2005 7:37 pm

You'll be better off without me around
You'll go far in this world, I've always known.
Having me near you is the last thing
on your mind.
Yes. It's good! Yet, sad. Much creativity, Acy! :)

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Post by Off_the_wall » Thu Sep 15, 2005 7:48 pm

that's so sad acy :(
SARAH

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Post by privacy » Fri Sep 16, 2005 4:08 am

Thanks Albamelia and Sarah! :)
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Post by QuietSoul » Fri Sep 16, 2005 6:26 am

Oh Chrissy, this is really lovely. It does have a lot of emotions in it..... do you feel better after writing it?

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Post by privacy » Fri Sep 16, 2005 6:37 am

Thanks Krys :) Yes a little better.
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Post by QuietSoul » Fri Sep 16, 2005 7:28 am

You're welcome. :)

Take care of yourself, ok? Sometimes I worry about you.

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Post by -MyAngelMJ- » Fri Sep 16, 2005 7:54 am

Acy .. It sure has lot of emotions .. Its a bit sad but its really well written.
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Post by privacy » Fri Sep 16, 2005 8:18 am

Aw Krys.. no need to worry :) I'm always ok lol

Thanks, Keerthi! :)
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Post by Warrior » Fri Sep 16, 2005 9:49 am

baby it's really good.....very sad but really good

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Post by privacy » Sat Sep 17, 2005 2:13 am

aw thank you baby xxx
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Post by LoveMeIfYouDare » Sat Sep 17, 2005 9:27 am

its really good!love it!:)
It won\\\'t do, to dream of caramel, to think of cinnamon, and long for you...

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Post by privacy » Sun Sep 18, 2005 9:45 am

thanks!!
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