Kissing Me To Sleep

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Kissing Me To Sleep

Post by privacy » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:18 pm

Whispering words of love
Telling of intent,
the hushed giggle still playing in my ear.
Lips sweeping across my skin
Flower petals whirling with the leaves,
dancing with the wind.
Strong hands stroking my hair so gently,
insistantly seeking my lips with his.

Like a well practiced ballet
Moving amongst and around each other
gently teasing with longing looks,
kisses.. incoherent pieces of whispered needs.
Easily melting together
arms and legs wrapped and entwined
breath and lips on my back, neck, ears..
kissing me to sleep.
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Post by DarkChild » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:20 pm

farking looooooooooove it!!!!!!!! you talented rabbit
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Post by privacy » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:24 pm

You're just jealous.
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Post by minnie yu » Tue Mar 28, 2006 7:09 am

well-written poem..i wish i could write something like this.:rolleyes: .but i canot..:confused: :8-26-03respect:
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Post by MJJ_Lover » Tue Mar 28, 2006 7:56 am

aw this is beautiful and my favourite of yours that I have read thus far. :D You are growing as a poet!
aw and Minnie, maybe you can...when I first wrote I was real bad, but that desire to improve led the away and I'm better now...so give it a go :D
Well done Acy :)
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Post by privacy » Tue Mar 28, 2006 12:34 pm

minnie, thank you :wub: And I bet you could! There's loads of different styles, there is no right or wrong way to write a poem :) Just write what you're feeling.

Thanks Jodi :8-26-03fruits_apple This one's down to Lucy, otherwise it woulda ended up all rhyming and boring :D
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Post by Saphster » Sun Jul 09, 2006 12:06 am

This was so good! You're a true romantic. I loved it...it's a great scenerio to imagine oneself's in. :cloud9
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Post by MyAngelMJ » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:57 pm

Nicely Written, Acy :) Love it.
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