Acid Spiders

[rotten_kisses]

This is a poem/song i'm working on...what do you all think?

silver threads of your web
that web of lies
entangle me
entangle me
now i await you to eat me alive

wrap me up in your sin
don't let me go
constrict me
constrict me
now i await you to eat me alive

(chorus)
acid spider
drip your poison on me
burn through my skin
scream into my ear
the lies of our past
the lies of my life

let that dripping greed burn me alive
burn me
burn me
tear through my body
and consume me

tear through me
let me scream at myself
just burn me up
and consume me

(chorusx2)

entangle me
constrict me
dont let me go
burn me
consume me
dont let me go
scream at me
lie to me
dont let me go

(chorusx3)

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:cryptic

 

[Michael_Jackson's_SexyGal]

very nice!!! I like that!

It reminds me of Sneddon and Michael,

and Michael is the spider and Sneddon is the prey!!! cool!!!!

 

[Billie]

very cool

 

[rotten_kisses]

thank y0u!
*feels all warm and l0ved |ns|de* hehe

 

[Michael_Jackson's_SexyGal]

your welcome