Blue Eyes

[privacy]

I feel a little odd about posting this here.. but Krystle ordered me to and she scares me.

=D


For Paul..

Watching us in my head endlessly
Every time I pause in the same place
It's that moment, there, I guarantee
Where my heart begins to race.

Your lips are inches away from mine
Eyelashes so close they touch my own
Your eyes so blue, how can I decline
This wonderful feeling I've grown to know.

The way you look at me, it makes me so
.. breathless. And not alone.
I never knew happiness could be this strong
Now I want to know if it can last lifelong.

 

[QuietSoul]

Yeah, Mrs, you do as I say!!! lol

Like i said in the email, I'd love to write something like this, but I just cannot do it. It comes out all wrong.

This is so beautiful. It really is, Chrissy.

Has Paul read it?

 

[privacy]

Krystle, your poetry is beautiful. Really is. There's so much emotion in your poems and you're so much better than I am.

I'm glad you like it

No.. am takin it over there tonight methinks.. I hope he likes it.

 

[QuietSoul]

Thanks for liking my poems... but honestly, there is a innocence in your poetry that is so attractive.

Let me know what Paul thinks, if you don't mind.

 

[privacy]

haha that's cus I AM innocent!

But thanks for letting me know.. I didn't know that before

 

[QuietSoul]

You? Innocent? HA HA HA!!! :biglaugh: Great joke, the best of the year, lol.

But yes, your POETRY is innocent.. it's lovely..

 

[privacy]

I'll get you.

 

[Anonymous]

gorgeous!

 

[frozen rose]

I love it Acy

 

[privacy]

aw thanks, Jess.. don't often see you round this part of the forum

Thanks fran

 

[frozen rose]

You're welcome

 

[privacy]

haha didn't see this

Yeah, Mrs, you do as I say!!! lol

Mrs? Yaokay. LOL

Paul hasn't read it yet.. didn't have the time to show him last night, had a creepy git in the pub that wouldn't leave me alone.

 

[QuietSoul]

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Yeah, Mrs, you do as I say!!! lol

Mrs? Yaokay. LOL
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Something wrong, Mrs? lol

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Paul hasn't read it yet.. didn't have the time to show him last night, had a creepy git in the pub that wouldn't leave me alone.

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Ahh... ok then, but you will show him another time?

 

[privacy]

Krys.. I gave him the poem last night and he liked it

Tho i've just noticed a REALLY big flaw in it LMAO

He has alopecia(sp) and he doesn't actually have eyelashes

 

[privacy]

Something wrong, Mrs? lol

AND IM NOT MARRIED!!!!!!!!11one.

 

[MyAngelMJ]

Cute poem Acy

 

[Shannon]

Awww.. I love this poem. It's so warm and filled with emotions. You're a good writer, privacy

 

[privacy]

Thanks Keerthi When are we gonna see some of your poems, hmm?

thank you Shannon It was a hard one to write.

 

[MJJ_Lover]

Aww yeees. This is beautiful , and very endearing. Warms your heart right up!
Keep it up gurl.

 

[privacy]

awww thank youuu! =D