Everything I Ever Dreamed Of

[privacy]

Lame title I know, but I've already used, "No title" and "No title.. again" haha Plus, I am almost certain I have posted this here before but I couldn't find it for some reason so... here it is! haha



im not givin up on this love
because you know i think the world of
the way you are
the way you be
i need no degree of guarantee.

wrap your legs around me, you know i'll succumb
how could anyone keep from
this delicious person you've become?

you kiss my cheek, you kiss my hair
Of your own beauty you're so unaware

and all this i feel as you sleep on
heavy breathing, way past dawn
kissing your cheek, your form i mould to
loving you.. for all that you do.

 

[QuietSoul]

how could anyone keep from
this delicious person you've become

I could NEVER come up with such a line, it's beautiful. I could never write anything this RAW. Really great.

When did you write this?

 

[privacy]

5th of January! haha I don't remember things like that.. I just checked when the document was created on my pc LOL

I was so sure I'd posted this tho.. hmm.

And it's not beautiful. The rhyming's shit.

 

[MJJ_Lover]

Love this... it oozes with sensuality and passion, but it's beautifully subtle.

my fave part:

wrap your legs around me, you know i'll succumb

It's really ... passionate, intense, but not 'disgusting' in any way.

:love

 

[privacy]

That's how I wanted it to be, Jodi! Thank you for saying that

 

[MJJ_Lover]

you're welcome