I\'d Give Anything.

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Really personal poem about my gran and grandad. If you don't like, don't waste your breath.



They wouldn't let me see you
"No place for a child"
I converted and prayed
And I begged and I screamed.
I've hated hospitals since.

She depended so much on you.
You waited on her hand and foot.
The purity and love in your heart
only matched by hers.

It was inevitable
her death.
Broken heart.
I needed her. She was all I had.
But I guess she needed you more.

Even at my young age
I knew I'd rather die
Than grow up in this world
With two of my fravourite people.. gone.


I'd give anything to get you back.

I'd give my life.

 

[DarkChild]

thats so sad and beautiful. It's not bad at all, it's wonderful and gets it across. Especially the last part

 

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I was worried it wouldn't.. writing while emotional doesn't work :laugh

Thanks girly

 

[LoveMeIfYouDare]

its really touching!its beautifully written...

 

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Thanks girl.. nice to see you in this part of the forum

 

[QuietSoul]

Chrissy... this has brought a tear to my eye. This is exactly how I feel about my Grandmother. I love her so much, and I miss her even more.

Thank you for this poem. It has given me something to think about.

 

[-MyAngelMJ-]

Its a really touching and beautiful poem.

 

[Off_the_wall]

that brought tears to my eyes acy, so sad, but so beautiful <33

 

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Thanks, Krys! I didn't think it would do that.. but I'm glad it did.

Thanks, Keerthi ... sarah thank you so much.. I love your poetry

 

[abbymjgirl]

That's a real beautiful poem..yet sad. But very well written, Acy! I liked it.

 

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thanks, girl

 

[Warrior]

hi baby a very sad poem but also very good

 

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Thanks Yogi =D