The Night Sky

[QuietSoul]

The Night Sky

I lay down my head,
And look at the sky,
The stars are twirling,
And twinkling so high.

I see the constellations,
Of Pisces, Aries and Taurus,
Compiling the pictures,
That give a meaning to all of us.

The reasons of life,
Staring down at me,
An all too clear image,
Of what was to be.

I see into the past,
And into the future,
Of a lost day and age,
Of looking forward to find closure.

But why is it so,
With all this insight,
I can't find me,
I'm lost inside.

All of the stories,
Conveyed by the stars,
I am not mentioned,
Even if I look for hours.

After all is said,
I'll be lost forever,
But in you I find,
A key for all that I treasure.

The sky has everything,
I accept that fact,
But you are the only star,
That lives in my heart.

 

[-MyAngelMJ-]

Krys, That was so wonderfully written. I love the way u express your feelings and emotions. This is a real sweet poem.

"After all is said,
I'll be lost forever,
But in you I find,
A key for all that I treasure.

The sky has everything,
I accept that fact,
But you are the only star,
That lives in my heart."

I love these two. i donno why.
I wish I could someday write like this

 

[QuietSoul]

Thanks so much, Keerthi...... I was going to call you Kerr then. :greenlaug Sowwie! I'm just trying to find a suited nickname for you.

But anyway, so pleased you like this poem. Without sounding too cocky, I like it too. LOL.

 

[QuietSoul]

I don't usually do this, but..... *cough*Bump*cough*.......

 

[privacy]

omg.. that first vers..

"I lay down my head,
And look at the sky,
The stars are twirling,
And twinkling so high."

Wow... I actually don't have words that fit the beauty of this.. I love your poetry, I really really do.

 

[QuietSoul]

Ooh.. Goodness, not expecting that reaction.. Thanks so much, darling! Glad you like it.

 

[Warrior]

But why is it so,
With all this insight,
I can't find me,
I'm lost inside.


Krys your poems get better, this part I relate to quite often

 

[QuietSoul]

Thank you, Yogesh.

 

[LoveMeIfYouDare]

i think its great!ur really talented!

 

[QuietSoul]

Thank you so much.