OMG I wrote a poem! lol

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miss

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here goes... be brutal! lol


I have loved you forever
Though I don’t know you at all
You're so far away from me
Always have been always will be
You don’t even know I exist
But somehow I feel that if you knew,
You'd love me too

Sometimes I let myself imagine
How one sweet day we will meet
You'll look into my eyes
And you'll sweep me off my feet
But I just sit by the window
As I drift away in thought

I realize once again
I will always be in love with you
No matter the strength of the pain…
 
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miss

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Shannon;187449 said:
Michelle, that was really good. :) Is it your first poem? Thumbs up. :thumbsup :p
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No... not really but its the only one I'm willing to publish here! lol

thanks!
 
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mysteriousone

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OMG I don't fricken believe it! LMAO! Shouldn't you be updating your fic before you take on writing poems? :p :lol JK

I have to admit though, that poem is really something...............perhaps you should switch to poems altogether cause they don't take up as much time as writing a chapter for a fic, lol! I'm only teasing ya, lol-- you're definitely talented in this area TOO! :D

Thanks for sharing Michelle!

:wub:

Mysti!
 
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miss

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uranusbluedanger1;187503 said:
Yay! Miss wrote a poem!! And it's really good! :D You never told me you could write poems. lol. Keep it up!
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That's cause I cant! lol

but thanks anyhow :)
 
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miss

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mysteriousone;187520 said:
OMG I don't fricken believe it! LMAO! Shouldn't you be updating your fic before you take on writing poems? :p :lol JK

I have to admit though, that poem is really something...............perhaps you should switch to poems altogether cause they don't take up as much time as writing a chapter for a fic, lol! I'm only teasing ya, lol-- you're definitely talented in this area TOO! :D

Thanks for sharing Michelle!

:wub:

Mysti!
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Awww thx mysti! *giving mysti a big hug till she turns blue* lol

poems are shorter!! yay for poems! :lol

But I rarely get inspired (as you already know) haha

most of the poems I write (which u can count on one hand...)
are pure crap... this one came out ok though

thx anyhow myst luv ya lots!:wub:
 
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Saphster

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This was very sweet. Is it Michael related?:lol It sounds like it could be...

But, this was sweet. Like when you have a crush on someone, and they have no clue. And you think they'll never notice you.
 
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Shannon

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Saphster;191966 said:
This was very sweet. Is it Michael related?:lol It sounds like it could be...

But, this was sweet. Like when you have a crush on someone, and they have no clue. And you think they'll never notice you.
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In case you haven't noticed, Michelle is just as ready to hump Michael as you are, Sapphy. :lol :lol :p
 
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miss

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Shannon;192003 said:
In case you haven't noticed, Michelle is just as ready to hump Michael as you are, Sapphy. :lol :lol :p
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Veronica shut the F** up or its five accross the eye for you girl!

you perve!!!! :lol
 
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